SELF - EVALUATION OF MY ORAL PRESENTATION

TRANSCRIPTION

John Travolta is an American Actor. He was born in Englewood, New Jersey on 18 February 1974.
When he was a teenager he was an actor and a dancer. When he was a little boy he liked to work in the theatre because his mother was and actress.
Five years later he recorded his first film; "La lluvia del diablo". Four of his famous films are Grease, "Fiebre del Sábado noche", "Blow out" and "The experts".
Now John is married with Kelly Preston and he lives in Jumbolair, Florida. They've got two children: Jett and Ella Bleu. He likes planes and he's got 5 planes.

MY OPINION

1. PRESENTATION:

I used a Power point and I spent 2 minutes aproximetlly.

2. BODY LANGUAGE

I looked of a camera and the audience and I move a bit, but I was a little nervous. So, I didn't read very much.

3. STRUCTURE

I organize my ideas in order and I explained well t the contents.

4. CONTENT

The information is correct and detailed, with examples.

5. LANGUAGE

The grammar is correct and varied and the vocabulary is good. I try not to repeat words and I use the internet with the words I don't understand.

6. PHONETICS

I pronounced "oasis" properly. But, I was a little nervous. It is my typical problem!!!

MY FINAL MARK IS 8

What have you done well? I've done well the POWER POINT and the content.

What do you need to improve? I need to improve my pronunciation, my explanation and especially my control of nerves!!!